Hello ladies and gentlemen...
As I've mentioned numerous times, I will be rewriting Leaving The Friendzone after I finish this version. Well, that's only half true.
I've been trying and trying on multiple occasions to write the next chapter, but I can't bring myself to do it. To boot, it seems like a huge waste of time to write a chapter that will only be deleted soon anyway. So rather than adding to a dead-ended story, I've decided to start re-writing the edited version now rather than later. I really don't like this version and where it's headed, plus the over-all details of LTFZ. I really hope the new version will be as good as I've planned it to be.
In the edit, I plan to fix many things, such as;
*Making the characters personalities consistent
*Better descriptions in general
*Longer chapters. (This goes along with my last point)
*More school scenes. I don't think I have even 3 scenes at their school, which doesn't really make sense, considering that it takes place 5/7 days a week...
*And moreee...
*I think I'm going to give Ella and Cory more of a life outside of each-other; different friends, going places with others, (I think I'm going to make Cory more of a popular guy with quite a few friends, and Ella the more reserved shy girl. Not to the point of cliché though.)
*I may or may not change Ella's name. It doesn't really go with what I'm going for with regards to her personality, etcetera.
What do you think? Is there anything else I need to change...? If there's anything you want to see in LTFZ draft 2, PM me or put 'er in the comments, it'd mean a ton to me.
*backs up and takes off down the street, stumbling over own feet.*
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Leaving The Friendzone
Teen FictionI've been friends with Cory since we were 6. Despite everyone we know poking fun at us for hanging out all the time, the subject of 'dating' never came up. But lately, I've been thinking about him differently. The way his eyes glint when he smiles a...
