DO OVER ( cause the last one sucked)

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How's everybody! Hopefully better than me I've woken up at five and fallen asleep at 11 for a week now. MY BODY WASN'T BUILT FOR THIS! Immm sooo tired and moody 😒😴😤 anyyyywho this is a redo of 'jack is back' cause the more I read it the more I hated it. there gonna be similar except for the ending, enjoy

Nobody noticed the slim red haired boy raced by. Nobody noticed his scruffy clothes of bulky bag. Nobody saw him enter a dark dreary apartment. Nobody cared. Nobody was there when it happened.

Jack entered his one room apartment. It was a dusty, dirty, and cramped place. No running water, no air conditioning, no heating, no electricity. But it was shelter. He pulled out his flashlight and a granola bar. It was all he had managed to get today. He took a bite and looked around. Squeaks and little patters echoed through the walls. He groaned. mice again. He never had the heart to kill them. Later I'll do it he thought. Reaching into his pack he pulled out his favorite book, one full of fantasy, fiction, and adventure. Those we were his favorite. He longed for their life. One full of excitement, close calls......friends..family. He shook his head. Enough of that. This was the real world. The real world was full of cruelty, hardship, and hate. It hated its residents, it hated the life, it hated him. Fighting back tears he climbed the ladder to the roof.

Jacks POV

Ugh I hated when this happened. I took an angry bite of my granola bar and shoved the wrapper into my pocket. The hurt would build and build and finally come out into...this. A breakdown or another PTSD attack. Right now it was breakdown. Better in someways. Worse in others. A year slipped down my cheek. UGH I HATE CRYING! I threw my head back and rested it on the 'ground'. Stars. The stars had always calmed me before. They did now. I starting counting the stars. Wondering about the things that I could be. That's when I saw it.

~~~cliffhanger!~~~~~



































KIDDING!!

*cue crashing and cat call*
I spun around to see a boy holding a trash can lid, guilty faced. I nearly fell off the roof. "How...houdyougetuohere!!!" I yelled and stuttered. That's possible right. " umm oops?" He said with a innocent smile. He threw it down and took a step towards me. My eyes widened and I tools a step back. Only problem? There wasn't anything to step back on.

Sorry I really am gonna end it there and that only because we're watching Star Wars! XD so yeah I'll finish it when it's over. By then it probably wouldn't matter wether or not I'm watching Star Wars!

Next contest!! BOOK QUOTES! Guess the book it's from, and for extra credit, who said it! >:) may the force be with you!

1. "My thoughts are stars I can't Fathom into constellations."

2. "Hercules, that guy is is like the Starbucks of Ancient Greece.. everywhere you look there he is."

3. "Oh course it's all in your head! But who is to say it isn't real?"

4. "Becoming fearless isn't the point. That's impossible. It's learning to control your fear, and how to be free from it."

5. I can't think of another so bonus! (It's a song) "excuse me are you Aaron burr sir?"

I honestly don't care if you look them up or anything XD especially that last one! Yeah good luck!

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