finally i'm finishing the Jack story

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I stepped back. Only problem? There wasn't anything to step back on.

I opened one eye slightly. I hadn't hit the ground! I was hovering halfway between the roof and the ground. I looked up. The kid was looking down with a grin on his face. " what are you smiling about! I almost died!!" I yelled up. " noooo." He said. " you believe what you read, right? Well, that makes you a believer! And believers that want to come to live in my dimension, if they want to, at least," " whwho are yyou??" I stuttered.
"Names Peter," he said hopping if the roof. Flying down to my level. " what do you mean different dimension, how am I flying, and why" I gestured to myself "me?" "I think you know what I mean by 'I'm from another dimension', if all the magic was here binary would believe it. Some however, have such strong imaginations and faith, that they drag the magic from that universe, to this one. So those special chosen ones come to where the environment can handle the their power. Second, your a true believer. That means you have no doubt whatsoever that they exist, and they're out there, somewhere. Third. It's because your you that I chose you. I chose all the true believers, my shadow chooses the faiths, the stars ( their actually people, they're true believers that have past away, they guard the opening to the never dimension.) chose the waverings, and the doubters don't come at all!" Jack said brightly. "Ah." I looked down. "Umm how do i" " go up?" He finished." Think it!" And with that he flew back up to the roof. Well that's just great. But I did as he told me. Sure enough, I floated up to where he was sitting cross legged on a chimney. " that's it!" He cried. " try this!" He raced around the building and landed once again the chimney. "Ohh your in for it now!" I yelled back and copied him, adding a few flips of my own." Oh yeah!" And thus the race began.

When we finally landed, we were hardly able to stand due to laughter. "i haven't had that much fun in years" i gasped." in the never dimension, you could have fun likec that more often. you could have friends, a family, a home," that hit close to home. An ache began to form and tear started to well. "I..I I'll go." I stammered. Slowly at first than rather quickly. Peter gave me a look but lifted off the ground. Deep breath. I pushed off and imagined myself hovering, floating, then soaring. When I opened them I was flying alongside Peter. As we flew higher, the stars got brighter. And I looked back one last time over the city. The city. It hadn't given me anything! Not a family, home, friends, love, not even a second thought. A pit began to form. A hard knot developed in my throat. I spun around and continued forward into the dazzling, blinding light. When I exited the cluster of lights, my companion was silent. When I turned, Peter Pan was gone.

Hioooo!! Hope you all like it! I personally LOVE it compared to the other one, I might just delete that little piece of trash. Anyways enjoy!!

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