Rants And Stuff

in language arts

I have to make a short story

Mine is called

Better this Way

After a long period of Sadness, suicidal thoughts and loss, Archer turns to murder to get back the one he loves the most.

Its about a guy who lost his parents and..just everything and this girl is like...his rescue.

They date for years and years. Archer had never felt happier

Then she dumps him claiming "she doesn't love him anymore".

So now Archer wants to kill her new boyfriend and get back with her.

Y'know, when I write in class I feel so smart and original.

But when I'm on wattpad...I'm just.....ehh...it's "okay"...do you have that feeling sometimes?