Can someone please give me feedback on how I am doing and how I can improve. Please I don't mind what you say and if you have any ideas for this book feel free to leave a comment. I'm sorry if you don't like it as this is my first fan fiction and I love NCIS but unfortunately I don't own NCIS.
Tony's POV
Yea McGee? Tony we have a problem McGee said with panic in his voice. What is it McGee spit it out! I yell. It's Ziva. He says quietly I race out of interrogation room and run to the bathroom where I last saw Ziva go. That's when I saw her lying down unconscious in a pool of blood.
Everything after that felt so slow, paramedics rushing in, it was all just a blur. I want to wake up from this horrible nightmare.
Sorry it's really short.
I'm really sorry, I understand if you don't like this book. Please please please comment. To let me know how I am actually doing. PLEASE!!!!!!!
I'm also sorry if I don't update as much because of school and problems at home, I don't know if I will update either until I get comments or/and a vote.
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