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So I hated my old story and I needed to make it better. I hated the way Effie acted and the way the dialogue was. I didn't like the way she thought, I found it very childish and I don't know why I didn't re-write it sooner. I know a lot of you liked the old one but I'm hoping you'll like this one better. The old one was written almost a year ago and I didn't have ANY experience in writing AT ALL. I'm hoping this one is better by a long shot. A lot of the ideas will still be the same and almost all the events will stay the same, I may change a few that I found unnecessary or that I didn't like. I may add new events that I find better but I highly doubt it. Tell me what you think is better in this one, tell me what you think is worse. Thanks! :)

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