DESTIEL Fanfic Reviews

Angel's Café

Author: Team0Free0Will

Review Score: 64/100

Description:
25 year old Castiel Novak owns and works at the local café in town. He knows the small Kansas town like the back of his hand; it's his home. He knows the regulars by name, what they drink, and the amount they tip.
But, when a new costumer from out of town discovers his small, self-owned, Café, he realizes he didn't know everything as well as he thought he did. And, that includes his own sexuality as well as the new guy in town.

Review:
Not the best but not the worst either. I believe that this story could've been amazing if everything didn't feel so forced.

I'm not particularly a fan of fanfics were Dean and Cas barely meet and the next thing we know after one week they're making out, especially in this one where it starts off with Cas thinking Dean is a huge douche. I wasn't too fond of when the author has one character telling the other character everything that's wrong and why they do this or that just because the other character says "What's wrong?", "I can help you", or "Tell me what's going on." Like back tf up. Y'all just met and you want him to start getting into some deep 2 in the morning conversation with you???

The plot is all over the place. It seems as if the author had a pretty good idea for the story but it was messy. At some points you can even say it's a bit ridiculous. One of the most terrible parts was when Cas was being super clingy after only dating Dean for about two weeks and being jealous because Dean was hanging out with Sam more. I was NOT happy with how the author handled that part.

It's quite frustrating to say the least.

This story was, in my opinion, not too great. I wouldn't read it a second time but that's only my opinion. So I suggest that you read it yourself because it is possible that this could be your 100.