DESTIEL Fanfic Reviews

Maybe

Author: madison_boyer1

Review Score: 59/100

Description:
I've seen a lot of Destiel stories and most of them aren't as satisfying as I wanted! Not enough romance, or there was bad writing. So I figured I'd write one. In this story, Dean and Castiel are high school students. Castiel is new, and Dean notices him immediately. Feelings form, and eventually the temptation is too much. I encourage you to read this, even if the description doesn't sound as appealing as the story actually is:)

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Thoughts:
Plain, rushed. That's part of what I think of Maybe. This may be (get it?) the most rushed story I've ever read. The plot was quite boring and the fact that it was all rushed didn't make it any better. I mean, kudos to the author for writing a Destiel story she would like, but gosh. This story definitely was not satisfying.

It being rushed was pretty much what ruined the story. I thought the plot itself was just fine. Dean and Cas' relationship was so rushed it made me want to cry. They literally had just started talking and next thing you know they're kissing. What the actual heck? It was incredibly ridiculous and I did not enjoy that, especially with the way Dean had acted before the kiss.

The whole way Dean and Cas' relationship started was complete nonsense from the beginning. It would've been way better if they had started out slowly and worked their way up from there. Dean and Cas could easily be compared to horny rabbits that were just thrown into a cage together in this story.

Past the "story being rushed part", the supposed "climax" of the story wasn't too great either. It felt as if the author had no idea of what to do so they said "Hey! I should just do the first bad and plain thing that comes to mind for the climax". Boring.

Though this story may not have the best writing or plot, that does not mean that the author is incapable of writing one. If and when they do choose to write another story, before that they should practice their writing. When you want to be good at anything, what you have to do is practice because in the end it does pay off.

I didn't mind anything else of the story. In all honestly, I wouldn't recommend for you to read this story. However, no matter how unsatisfied I was with this story I do hope you give it a chance because this might be your 100.