Fighting For Falling- One Piece fanfiction

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Pretty much I'm so lazy that I skipped all the way through Thriller Bark where it would at least be different, also I'm also so lazy that I wrote this three months ago, had it on file, and just didn't put it up. Also I've been reading back through this from the very beginning and I feel like it could be better, so perhaps a rewrite is in store. Anyways, I also want to hear my reader's point of view of how this OC fanfic is going, how can I improve? For the rewrite to make it better? I know my grammar is terrible, as long as it doesn't distract from the actual reading I feel that it's not so important. But other than that, anything good? Do you like Caroline or Olie? Are you liking how things are going with Zoro and Caroline? (also I'm sorry if you like Robin and Olie, that totally means nothing) Anybody OOC? I'll work on that, just say something... I really want to make this the best to my ability, but I realize that nobody will probably give me any constructive feedback anyways... 

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“A Real Hero is someone who stands up even when he cannot,”

Jared Leto

Caroline

One Piece  Season 10 Episode 377-378 “My Nakama’s Pain is My Pain – Zoro Prepares to Die,”

      Right when Luffy beat Gecko Moria and we all were alive, how had their shadows taken, Nami suddenly started freaking out.

      “He’s here,” Nami started looking up at the sky, “Everyone? Are you listening? While we were fighting with Moria… I didn’t say anything but… on this island… another person was here!”

      “Well, who is it that you’re just so scared about?” Olie asked getting closer to her.

      “Another shichibukai!” she exclaimed.

      “Luffy’s beaten two of those so far, I’m sure he can take another one.” I said as we all look over at Luffy passed out from exhaustion on the ground.

      We all then looked up and saw this large top heavy male figure sitting on top of one of the walls, that nearly crumbled down.

      Then all the restored zombie pirates started freaking out, “Wait, he said dispose…?”

      Sanji, Olie and Zoro then step up, Usopp goes, “I can’t believe we’re fighting another shichibukai!”

      Olie walked over by then, “Count me in, I need a good fight,”

      Zoro then steps in front of all of us. “You guys get back… I’ll deal with this!”

      I wanted to stop him but I knew it would do no good. He knew it was his duty as first mate to step up in Luffy’s place as Luffy would have done.

      “Be careful!! He’s got some kind of ability! I saw it!” Nami yelled out towards Zoro who was making his way towards the figure on the ledge. “When he touched someone with his hand, she vanished! He can teleport, too!”

      Then right before our eyes there he stood before us.

      “He’s huge,” various echoes around us.  “When did he?!”

      Then all the pirated started charging him.

      “You guys stop!” weird pig bride yelled. “You’re no match for him!!”

      They all charged him anyways but once they got close to him he reached out his hand and they instantly vanished.

      “He didn’t even touch them,” Chopper muttered.

      “Pirate Hunter Zoro…. Let’s start with you,” Bartholomew Kuma called out looking at Zoro.

      We all stopped. Zoro was for sure going to be a gonner if we all didn’t do something.

      “It’s fine, you guys! Just get back,” Zoro yelled then he looked back at us. “He wants me! Didn’t you hear him?” then he stopped when he looked at me. Those eyes that said, I’m sorry, I’m probably not going to be okay. “I’ve accepted this fight… I don’t need your help. Don’t humiliate me…!”

      Kuma then accepts Zoro’s fate. “You all have a pretty good reputation. I’ve heard that Strawhat Luffy… has gathered a number of skilled crewmates.”

      We all got flattered like Chopper usually does.

      “You guys are causing a lot of trouble. Even though you were known before… It’s not just the captain who’s getting noticed.” Kuma said as Zoro was preparing to battle.

      “This kind of misfortune is the way the world is. If you make excuses, will some one come and save you? If I die here then that’s just my limit as a man!” Zoro said finally charging at Kuma.

      “Oi, Zoro, wait that’s too reckless, you’re too beaten up right now!” Usopp yelled.

      “Usopp, he knows that,” I said looking over at Usopp.

      Once Zoro finally charged straight towards Kuma he seemed as though nothing happened. Was this really happening? Is this guy so invincible that Zoro couldn’t even put a scratch on him? All Kuma had to do was just hold his pawed hand out towards Zoro causing an instanteous  amount of damage.

      “Look! Even though Kuma has hardly done anything, Zoro’s breathing that hard…” Usopp called as we noticed Zoro was already panting.

      “Just what is his ability?” Nami wondered, “What are those marks in the rubble?”

      Kuma extended his hand out showing what seemed to be a paw.

      “36- pound cannon!” Zoro called out one of his attacks but right about as Zoro’s sword was going to hit him, Kuma stopped it with his hand. Then this shock came back at Zoro almost as if, Kuma took Zoro’s attack and repelled it back at him.

      “So that’s your ability!” Zoro said becoming exhausted, “The power to repel anything,”

      “I ate the Nikyu nikyu fruit… I’m a paw man!!” Kuma explained holding out his hands. Then he gets ready to fight Zoro. “You’re time is up..” he extended his hands out and announced his attack, “Swift Pad Cannon!” multiple paws came flying towards Zoro, he tried dodging each of them but he was getting tired really fast. Zoro was able to stop Kuma using his swords but Kuma’s paw’s blocked each one of them. Suddenly Zoro was thrown back.

      I gasped knowing this was not going well in his direction at all. I covered my mouth from screaming or yelling at him to stop or anything else I would have an impulse to do.

      Zoro laid there on the ground panting. Unaware that Kuma was already behind him about to attack. 

Everybody started waking up as I realized that we were all okay. Luffy seemed astonishingly completely healed. He was bouncing around everywhere happy that everything was over and we got to party. Having a feast where he got to eat all he could like we normally do. Everybody was here except for Zoro. Where was he? I got up still very injured from Kuma’s blast as I ran off looking for Zoro. Limping I managed to find my way to where he was. I saw his tall silhouette. Once I got to him I also his blood traumatically dripping from his forehead, to his cheeks, to his arms and the rest of his body. Definitely this was the worst I have seen him. There was no possible way he could ever survive this, or ever go through something this severe again

      “Zoro!” I exclaimed noticing that Sanji actually beat me here.

      “What happened here?” Sanji asked forcefully totally surprised that Zoro was still alive yet alone still standing.

      I ran over to Zoro in front of Sanji as Zoro muttered, “Nothing! Absolutely nothing happened here,” Zoro used his last breath to announce that as he collapsed into my arms totally passed out.  All of his blood soaked through my clothes as Sanji ran over to help me carry him.

      “I never doubted you,” I told Zoro, “Not once,” Sanji and I then started walking back to the camp to get him fixed up with Chopper.