the school of rock tour (sequel to the truth behind school of rock) (completed)

chapter 56: "that obvious"

Tomika's POV

I can't wait to tell the others about one of the most important people in the music business, Ryan, came to our last performance. Just then I see the others walk in

Summer: ok Tomix what's going on with you

Tomika: what do you mean

Freddy: you've been acting different ever since the last show

Zack: and what did you want to tell us

Tomika: ok, 1. Ryan Mole was watching our last performance and 2. you can come in now

Esme then walks on to the tour bus and Lawrence's face lights up

Lawrence: Esme what are you doing here

Esme: Tomika invited me to join you guys

Summer: Tomix why did you do that

Tomika: I could see how much Lawrence missed her and plus Esme and her friends are my back up dancers

Zack: for what babe

Tomika: my dance number

Freddy: since when were you doing a dance number

Tomika: since I planned it from the last performance we did

Summer: ok what did you mean by Ryan Moon watched our last performance

Tomika: since he is my business partner, he can to watch

Ryan Moon: and you guys were amazing, but I have some key areas that you need to work on

Tomika: go on

Ryan Moon: Summer singing is a bad idea, the crowd loves Tomika singing

Summer: that's mean

Ryan Moon: it's not personal, but it is, next you guys are off beat with each other

Freddy: what did you mean

Ryan Moon: your beat on the drums is not in time with the others

Tomika: is that it Ryan

Ryan Moon: yes that is all Tomika

Tomika: thank you

Ryan Moon then leaves the tour bus and the others look mad at me

Tomika: ok why are you guys mad at me

Lawrence: he basically told us everything that we did wrong Tomika

Tomika: guys this could help us get better