Derpstar was sitting on the edge of a marshmallow cliff. She was terrified that she might fall, so she started grooming her pelt.
Suddenly, a rock knocked her out and she fell off the cliff, shrieking but passing out.
(Flamefoot's POV, but it's still third person :)
Flamefoot was very far away, in the camp. Close by, he heard a shriek and ran as fast as lightning to the scene.
He saw Derpstar falling off a cliff. Since she was already supposed to be at the bottom of the cliff, Author-Chan put in that she was NOT passed out and hanging off the cliff with her claws.
"Flamefoot... HELP!" Derpstar screeched. She kept begging and begging for Flamefoot.
Flamefoot considered the results. If he helped, she would still be his mother. If he let her fall, she would die and he would be leader.
"Help, Flamefoot!"
"No."
"No??"
"No."
"As in NOOOO??!?!"
"YES!"
"Then, help!"
"No!"
"I told you to help! Please!!! Don't let me die! I'm too young!"
"I'm going to be leader now..." Flamefoot didn't want Derpstar to die, but he felt too ambitious.
"Please... My son..."
Suddenly, Flamefoot felt extremely angry. "NO! I WILL NOT HELP! DO NOT CALL ME YOUR SON! YOU LET MY REAL MOTHER DIE! SHE WAS YOUR SISTER! I DON'T WANT YOU! LEAVE ME ALONE!" He yowled and, turning away, scrambled up the slope into the territory of his new Clan.
(Derpstar)
Derpstar wailed for Flamefoot to come back and help. She tried scrabbling up the cliff to get another paw-hold, but her claws slid off.
She knew this was how she would die. And Flamefoot, her sister's son, whom she adopted, would let her!
She felt angry and spirit ran through her. "I'M NOT DYING YET!" She yelped to no one in particular.
"Talking to yourself?" Came a very fearful voice.
"WHINYIDIOT!" Derpstar screeched. The surprise blow came in so hard, her claws slid off completely and she began falling, falling, falling...
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Haha cliffhanger!
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DawnClan Rp
RandomIf you are looking for a warriors fanfiction, that is completely stupid and funny, HERE YAH GO! This is also an rp with the unfamous (that's a word) warriors I have created! Enjoy... :)
