Hello yes I know I didn't update for awhile I have been literally bombarded with homework and
school work. So here's part 2 and I think I am planning on writing a part 3 also.
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8. POV of the guy..... Do not make him sound like a girl if you don't know how to write a males point of view then I suggest not to. Sorry..
9. Popping the "p" I really don't know why is it necessary for authors to always include that like whenever a character says nope or yup like really?
10. Incest stories are just weird, step brothers I understand but incest...God NO! I really don't know how anyone can bear reading this I gave it a shot once thinking it was a step brother story, but omigod was I scarred.
11. Why are some author rude? like if you ask them to update because they clearly didn't update for like 3 weeks or even few months. Or if you write rants and someone wants to defend that topic I don't think you should go apeshit on them. Yes you can reply them but in a proper manner unless the reader is being rude.
12. Most of the What's on the Hot list sucks. I said MOST not all.
13. The title longer than the story....WTF is up with that?
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That's all I have readers until next time :*
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Rants and Raves
LosoweVery childish I started this when I was in high school and im an adult now! Book is finish never continuing
