Divergent : Tobias and Tris

Chapter 9

Tobias :

I stand there with Tris in my arms,
I know she never meant to hurt me, but why did Al even kiss her. Just sometimes I want to show that boy who's in charge. I look down at Tris and kiss her forehead she looks up at me "I love you" she says "I love you too, Tris" I say back.

Tris kisses me slowly and I kiss back, I put my hands on her waist and she starts kissing me harder, I kiss her harder.
I feel her hands slip down my back reaching for my belt, unbuckling it as she still kisses me.
She pulls it off, making my pants slip a little bit. I push her on the bed and take off my shirt. I lean, and kiss her again she smiles as she sees me shirtless.

I get close to her on the bed and unbuttoned her shirt, she didn't stop me. She undid her hair from her pony tail, her long and hazel hair going past her shoulders making her look stunning as we kiss. I take off her shirt, exposing
a lot of skin, she slides her hands down to my pants and unbuttons the button that keeps my pants on me.

Tris starts to laugh at me as i kissed her neck slowly. We stop and lay on the bed, both of us were shirtless Tris holds my hand and I hold hers. I bring her into a hug wrapping both of my arms around her, she fell asleep and then I do to.

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