blisters ; jayson

( bit of a poll/Q&A )

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Hi guys, this is not a chapter but me asking for your opinion about something

As I was proofreading the last chapter I started to notice that my chapters are beginning to become jam packed with information rather than a simple breakdown of what was happening

I'm thinking to dramatically try to structure my writing style so it would be easier to read.. for example a sentence per spacing and not a whole paragraph per spacing (I tend to ramble as I write)

What do you guys think about that? I feel like the entire story is becoming monotone with the amount of information I'm trying to put in a chapter.......?

Please tell me what you think or suggest a completely different answer in the comments below

Thanks for reading -M