Brief Study of Dramatic Structure: Yellow Parka

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It begins.

A rare rhythm of popping pipes and thudding paws and feet arises from above. A bark here and a bang there weave into the mix.

His door slams—my cue to stand by the window with a steaming mug of coffee under my nose.

Dog emerges first; yellow parka follows. Dog does his business; yellow parka kicks snow. Dog chases him; yellow parka laughs. Typical show until he slips and lays motionless—that’s atypical.

I run out in boxer shorts and boots. Yellow parka smiles and delivers the closing line.

"I always wondered what will bring you out to me."

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