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Welcome to the first Hidden Gems Awards! Here, you can participate in contests in order to get your story out there and known!
It's hard to get noticed in a place like this. That's why the Hidden Gems Awards exist! These awards...
I had forgotten what it felt like to touch a corpse. And now, Nicolai will remember too.
Judge's comments:
The title is pretty catchy for me as well as the cover. The description is good though I think it needs improvement. I understand that it's a thriller kind of book. You don't want it to be too revealing right? But you have to make the story description as clear as possible for the sake of your readers. Now for creativity check, I like how you made an effort for the characters because it will serve as a very big help when it comes to imagination purposes. There are minor grammatical errors but my main concern is that, there are lots of describing words. This could cause conflicts to your story and my advice here is to make your paragraphs short but with strong words and remarkable impact. I have no issues with the plot and it's really hard to find a good LGBT book so hooray for you. Thank you for sharing your story!
