Divergent, What if There was no War?

Chapter 2

***Auhor Note***

Pretty sure noone's read this yet. :) It's ok, I hope I get more reads soon! I'll just keep writing and see what happens. I have the story somewhat planned out in my head, but it's mostly spontaneous! I'll try to keep writing regularly! I really hope you enjoy my story. Not meaning to offend my fellow writers, (Not all of you are like this!) I find that a lot of the divergent fanfictions sre not close enough to the origional style of writing, for my liking that is. Like when people make the characters talk like yep, ya, that kind of thing. I really don't mean to be rude. My point is basically that I'm trying to erite this as close to the origioal style as I can. Don't be tooo hard on me! It's my first one! :D Happy readingggg!!

Chapter 2:

"Tris? Are you here?" I hear Tobias' worried voice. "Yes." I call. "I just needed to think." I sit up. He walks over to me and grabs the edge of the net. I nearly fall. Just like on my first day. Again, he catches me an sets me on the ground. "Welcome to Dauntless." He says with a smile. "And this time, its official."

I look into his eyes for a minute, then blush and look away. He softly kisses my head. "I'm sure you'll pick right. You can have whatever you want." He whispers as we walk back to his room.

When we arrive he asks me what I think I'll choose. I tell him, and he seems happy that I'm happy. I'm still not completely sure... but the idea is defenitely growing on me. He kisses me again slowly, then stops. "We have to go now. We dont want to be late." He sighs. I sigh too and walk away. I go into the bathroom and pull my hair into a ponytail. I change into a black tank top, and black leather jacket, along with black jeans and combat boots. When I emmerge Tobias looks at me and smiles as I blush. "Sorry," He says, "You just look so amazing." I blush again, and pull him out into the hallway. We walk together. Just enjoying hte silence until we get to the pit.

Tobias takes his seat in front of the stage, and I walk over and stand on stage next to Christina and Will. Suddenly the audience goes quiet and I turn to see Eric on stage. "Well, a new year, a new set of initiates." he shouts. "I would like to congratulate them all for getting this far, and hurry up to move on to what we're here for. The job choosing. As Tris was ranked first, she gets first pick on jobs. Now, Tris... What do you choose?" I walk over, and he stares at me icily. He isn't going to be happy.

"I would like a position in the government." I say without emotion. "Also, I would like to train initiates each year." Done. I have made my decision, and I do not regret it. I take a deep breath and look at Eric. His face twitches, but he catches himself and goes back to epressionless.

"Well," he announces, "Welcome Tris Prior, this year's first new member of Dauntless. Tris, you can collect a key from the table over there for your apartment." The crowd starts clapping, and I walk over to the table and a key catches my eye. Room 106. Obviously I can't have room 6, so this is the next best thing. I take the key and go to stamd back with Christina and Will. "Nice choice." Will whispers to me. Christina just smiles as if she had guessed what I would choose all along. Damn Candors! I catch Tobias' eye and he smiles at me. I've done it. I've passed initiation, and now I have the life I was looking forward to. I suddely feel my face light up in a grin.

The rest of the ceremony goes quickly. Peter also ends up in government, but having a higher rank than him, I will have more power than him, and I enjoy that thought. Christina chooses to be a tattoo artist, and initiate trainer. Will chooses to work in the control room, and so does Uriah. Marleen also gets a job in the tattoo parlour. Christina gets me to show her my key before she walks up, and manages to get the apartment next to mine!

The crown this out, and Tobias finds me and hugs me. I relax into his arms, and he congratulates me. Christina comes running over and breaks us up. She announces, in tyical Christina style, that she is having a party in one hour in her room to celebrate. She tells me I have to come, and no exceptions unles I'm dead or nearly dead! When she turns away Tobias looks at me and rolls his eyes. I giggle. Christina is pretty intense. We walk back to his apartment together so I can pack up my stuff. Next, we go to the room all the tranfers were staying in, and pack up my stuff that was in there. I follow Tobias to where the apartments are we get given, and stop in front of 106. This is it, the proper start of my Dauntless life. Here goes! I take a deep breath and push the key into the lock. I shut my eyes as I push the door open, and when I open them, I see my home. This is where I will live. For the rest of my life.