(Drarry, Dramione Cinema Sins)

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by Quicksand_Potter_Fan

by Quicksand_Potter_Fan

*This is IF Cinema Sins did Wattpad books. Like: This story.So Cinema Sins' opinions will be in bold and in brackets-got it?*

It was a mess in the forbidden forest, I fire a few spells, trying to protect Hermione. Surprisingly, Harry defended me. (Harry's in love with you. So...Why shouldn't he save you?)

"Draco!" Hermione cried, "DUCK!"
I duck swiftly, seeing my girlfriend attack flawlessly. I can't do anything without her. Suddenly we're surrounded(who is 'we're'? Apart from Draco, Hermione and Harry- who else is with them!! Detail, please!) Ron signals s to back up, (ooohhh! That's who's ELSE is with them) as we did so someone hit a spell at Hermione.
"NO!" I shouted.

It was a flash of green blazing light. (Light show!)
I saw her body collapse onto the ground, lifeless "HERMIONE!" I scream "NO!" I kneel down next to her body "come back," I whisper, "please," I start sobbing, feeling hopeless.
(But, hey! Isn't there a stone to bring back the dead or some s*it like that?)

I look at Harry who sat beside me "shh, it'll be alright." he says to me.

"It won't be." I reply. ('It won't be okay' cliche')

I was hoping for her to come back...Hoping that she'd stay alive. Any sign of life. But it was done. Over. I stand, breathing heavily. (And they're surrounded by a bunch of Death Eaters. How come NONE of them has killed them yet!?)
I turn to the Death Eater that killed Hermione. "You!" I scream, I pointed my wand at the Death Eater. He removed his mask revealing my father- "dad..." I say.
"The job is done..." Lucius said, walking away. (Wait-what IS the job? Killing Hermione? Or leaving his son in mortal terror?)

(And then we'll just skip the part where, Ron goes off to find 'help'- like what kinda help? Help to carry Hermione or help that they were JUST attacked?)

An idea popped into my head, I want to see her again. (YOU JUST SAID THAT!)
"Harry," I say turning to him.

"Draco?" he replies. I see the agony in his expression. He's suffering too. (No, he IS suffering that Hermione is dead but suffering that reality is real and you love Hermione not him.)
"Give me the stone..." I say to him. (How does Draco know Harry has a f*cking Resurrection stone?)
"I- I don't have it on me-" he stutters.
"You do. Don't lie to me, Harry," I remark, (Determination.) "I want her back-please." (Draco is desperate!)

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If he gives Draco the stone... that will prove he'll never have feelings for him "no." Harry replied.
"I can't- I-"

"Please, give me the stone-Harry-give me the-"

Harry sighs and pulls out the stone (question: does Harry keep the stone everywhere he goes-if so. Does this mean he sees his dead relatives? Also, in the book it explains you shouldn't be too addicted to this.) "Promise you'll give it back." Harry says, handing Draco the stone.

" I will." (No you won't!) There was silence... Draco gasped as he saw her. It couldn't be true-
"Hermione?" Draco said, filled with tears.
"Yes, Draco?" Hermione replied.

"I'm sorry."
"Don't be." (If you're trying to do the cliche where 'don't be sorry' sorta think and depress me. Not working!)
"I should have realised he'd come after you." (Who is HE? STOP WITH THE PRONOUN GAME!!)
"I did expect your father to come after muggle-borns." (Ooh, that's who 'he' is...Draco's father-It was obvious, also did Hermione know she HAD to die? Why not Harry die instead or something but hey! Plot convenience.)

Draco took a deep breath and turned to Harry who was almost leaving, "stay with me-will you?" Draco asked. Harry turned to face him.

"Sure," Harry replied, taking his hand. (This is just too much)

*SO YEAH, PS: That was a sneak-peek on 'Bring Her Back' I will change it up in the actual book though, with explanation too.*

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