Title: Picking Up the Pieces
Author: MissTscra
Rating: 8.9/10
Status: Work in Progress
Authors Description: Summer is just an ordinary girl' with an ordinary life until her mother dies under suspicious circumstances. Forced into a spiral of rumours, revenge and crime. Summer tries to piece together what actually happened to her mother......... Add in a drunk grieving father, a hyper friend and a cute boy. Summers life just got a hell of a lot more interesting.............
My review of the story:
(Exactly what the description says and better)
My Thoughts:
The concept is great and I love that the storyline isn't like others. BUT ! the grammar isn't at the standard it should be, the description could do some improving aswell. Also try explaning the characters and surroundings, and make your chapter longer ;) because you got people hooked !
Pointers to Audience:
- A story that you can really get hooked to and engage in, READ IT !
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