Title: Jungle of Grit
Author: EddSmiff
Rating: 6.2/10
Status: Work in Progress
Authors Description:
Three school boys are plunged into a horrific new world, a world where danger is everywhere and survival is all that counts, even if it costs you all you are.
My Thoughts:
Nice story line but i dislike how short the chapters are, and how many errors there are in your work. Everytime i read a new entry i couldnt help but think how good it would sound with more detail and description and if you just dragged it on a bit, but because of this i had to pull down your rating. So in future try adding more description and reading it out loud to check for grammar mistakes. Also the use of a thesaurus would be very useful to you, and if you cant be bothered using one use the one on microsoft! Your writing would be so much better with more detail adn description and i'd like to see the changes in your writing if you chose to take my advice. Good luck
Pointers to Audience:
- I think everyone should support and comment on what they think on this book. I love the story line and with a little work this will be perfect.
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