Someone's dead in a book. Okay. We expect the character to grieve.
One chapter?
ONE
FUCKING
CHAPTER.
Someone comforts them then the next day it's; WOOOOOOOP WOOP BOI, IM LIT FAMMMMM. Oh, Grenada's death? I CRIED YESTERDAY, BUT TIMJOE MADE IT A L L BETTER!!!!
Like I get if it's a time skip, but otherwise GIVE EFFORT??
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Things Wrong With Fan Fiction (Or just Books In General)
Humorliterally anything that pisses me off in fan fiction books _not my cover art_