Things Wrong With Fan Fiction (Or just Books In General)

the "point out mistakes" then gets mad when you try / comments

Okay so when someone's like

Hey guys! Make sure to point out any errors!

That's fine. BUT THEN IT TURNS INTO

I flipped my hair, turning to Anna with a disgusted glare.

"What the hell? Your such a whore!"

She gasped, and smacked my cheek. She then proceed to shove me, and frowning.

"Not my fault Hannah turned gay after sucking you off you twat. Move peasant!!"

Hey! I just wanted to say you use you're instead of your ^^ also that reminded me of Daniel Howell lol

Okay I know how grammer works you fucking grammar nazi! Don't tell me how it works! You don't have to read it, nobodies forcing you too!
Also I love dannyboi

Okay calm down. *nobody's *to
Me too!!

Like um...

Calm the fuck down. You asked for it. Just fix it.

But keep the Dan there.