guess who is editing again!

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so i was reading back on the chapters i wrote earlier and i realized i didn't develop the characters the way i want them to be. when i first started writing this, i had no idea it would become this complex of a story so i made their characters (particularly phil) more relaxed and funny than they should be. now that i have realized what type of backstory they have, i'm gonna go back and edit to make the story fit better. you don't have to re-read it, but just know phil's personality may seem a little different than it has previously been. i'm not changing him entirely, i'm just making some of his character traits stronger/weaker than they were and making the plot & writing style more mature. 

i  promise this will be the last time i do major editing on this story, at least for a long time. You can expect most of these changes to be made sometime this weekend. 

thanks for putting up with me, 

-d.w.

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