mnemophobia | dh + pl

re-writing??

I try to avoid posting anything besides updates, but I really need some more opinions.

I keep trying to go back and edit this story, but I just don't like the beginning of it? Like some elements are okay, but I feel like, even if I make the writing style less cringe, it's still going to be cheesy just because of the plot.

I'm actually considering re-writing the story to a certain extent. I probably wouldn't change too much in the later chapters, but idk, I just don't know what to do so please help lol.

Here's some pros and cons of rewriting:

Pros:

It's kinda early on in the story, so it's not too late to change stuff!

I would most-likely be happy with the end result!

I would get to improve my work and make the story better as a whole!

I could make the characters/plot more suiting for the plans I have for this story now vs when I started writing it!

Cons:

it would be a significant length of time before my next update

I feel like I might lose reader's interests by taking so long

I don't want to have to make everyone re-read it to catch up with what I changed

I'm worried that I might not be motivated to re-write it, and it would just sit here until summer when I have a lot of free time (I don't think this would happen, but it could)

Please help me decide what to do because you guys play a big part in this story too. I wouldn't even be writing this if it weren't for y'all, so thanks for everything

-d.w.