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The Unwanted!
The meeting!
As I ran down the train stations path I felt my dark brown hair fly back into my face. I flicked my head to get it out of my face, as my skinny arms were too busy swinging to enhance my speed. I didn't have enough time to say good bye as I was already running late.
The light beamed into my bright blue eyes blocking my vision causing me to bump into people. I just ran on. As I leaped over bags and cases, dodged people and avoided the sound of trains departing in fear I said to myself "Not for my 7th year. I can't be late for the 'best days of my live'. My harsh tone made a old man turn in spite. “I am the daughter of the famous, wise and grand Harry Potter. What will people think?” Not like I really cared what people thought about me. It’s only the family name I care about. If I don’t the Potter name will be in ruins. If I damage it my family would hate.
My brothers wouldn’t even try to speak to me ever again. They spent all their Hogwarts years being good, saving life and dancing round like monkeys to impress everyone. But they don’t have to do that anymore. They left; Fred left last year and Albus about three or four years before. With no one left to dance, it’s left to me. Great!
I snapped back into reality as I got to the train. I boarded the train just in time, as I stepped on the doors slammed shut. “Close one” a dark, dangerous, low voice echoed from around the corner in my direction. I knew after that I was in the wrong cart. “If I were you I’ll get out of this cart before anyone see’s. They will find out about your burning passion for me. We can’t have that happening” A head then pecked around the corner and soon a body followed. He winked and made my legs feel weak. His emerald eyes sparkled like one million fireflies. His dark blond hair was pushed back as I looked he brought his fringe forwards to cover his eyes. He then un-tucked his top, I felt comfy.
In this light he looked kind of, hot. But no! I can’t look at a slytherin and feel love. Or even think he is hot. I know he is. I bet the girls love him at Hogwarts. I bet he is dark and dangerous. He belongs in Slytherin. Just looking at him makes my head spin and my knees feel weak.
I have to stop thinking like that. What would my Father think? “Laura what are you doing? You know how evil they are. I’m so disappointed in you! You don’t have the right to call yourself a Potter or even a Gryffindor. Get out of Hogwarts you don’t belong there” he would say. Or at least think. He is too nice to say it to my face, he would get my mum to speak to me and then it would be world war 3.
“I’m Ary, seeing as you don’t remember me. I guess we haven’t ever talked so you wouldn’t. I saw you around at times. Around Hogwarts” Ary paused as if he was holding something back, but I just continued to let him speak. “I don’t really talk to your type; I like to keep to myself. Your type just finds me to outgoing and forceful. Don’t they.. Laura?” Him knowing my name scared me. I don’t even know him yet he knows me, how is that? But he is definitely a Slytherin.
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The unwanted (Harry Potter FanFaction) (Laura x Ary) (on hold)
FanficThe youngest of all her siblings, Laura goes back to Hogwarts for her final year. But her easy, care free year takes a turn for the worst. When on the 1st day she sees someone but cant seem to put a face to the face. Will she remember him? Will they...