Hi, this is the second story im writing, the first being The Sleepover.
As im writing this I've been editing as well as I've been asking my English teacher to mark each chapter and to write how to improve it.
I've edited the first chapter already, and I'm going to edit 2 & 3 in the next few weeks, after that I'll try to edit them before I actually publish them.
I don't know how many chapters I'm going to write.
But I'm thinking of making a few series.
It's basically British Walking Dead set in England where the main characters are mostly children.
I'm going to have different chapters revolving around different characters P.O.V.s
This way im hoping to get more detail and emotions into scenes, rather than just having the perspective of the narrator.
Please comment any mistakes you notice in my story, and I'd be happy to hear suggestions of things you'd like to hear in the story.
Enjoy.
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World's Ending
Ciencia FicciónThe world has come to an end. During a drought in England, whilst people are looting shops for water, Lucy comes across a monster in a small corner shop. The monster was the shop keepers corpse. The dead becomes living and she must find refugee, the...
