I woke up looking down at myself, except there was a hole in me and Tana was sobbing on me. Tyler was kneeling beside her with his hand on her shoulder with a single tear trailing down his face.

"Im right her! Im ok!" I shouted.

"They cant hear you." I male voice said.

  I turned to se an old fat man, he has sort with gray hair and looked perfectly happy but for some reason had a sad feeling to him.

"Your dead, the living cant hear you, we can hear them but not the other way around." he said before walking off.

  I looked around and saw there were a bunch of people around most of them looked lost, but none looked dead.

"We should barrie her." Tyler said.

  I stood there as they dug my grave, then put my body in it, then covered me up, and lastly put a little makeshift grave marker above it. They then walked away and I followed what else did I have to do with my after life?

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