RAVEN (rough draft)

Introduction

My name is Raven im 5ft 11in, I have pitch black hair that is waist length but it is always in a ponytail, I have dark purple eyes, and am 16. Im not the kind of girl you want to mess with, I don't like trouble but I have nothing to lose. I have a pretty good death stare and I am good in a fight. I also have a dark secret that I hate to even think about, and I have a feeling it is what ruined my life.

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I lived with my parents till I was 7 then they died. I was going to be adopted but I ran away before thay could get all the details sorted out. I was on the run for a while in till I found a town that didn't have any rules against kids with no homes. I found a job at a blacksmiths, I cleaned up in tell I got old enough to do paper work.

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The year is 2592 the government crashed 100 years ago everywhere. A lot of people wanted different things so the split the world up. The North American content has an extremely weak government, The South American content has a very strong government, the African content has no government, the Australian content has been turned in to a jail for all other contents. The other contents are have mediocre governments at best. When you turn 20 you can choose to go to a different content if you want. This plan was perfect till Australia was over run, now there is a war happening over there. I live in the North American content were Idaho used to be.

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This is my very first story so I want to know your options.