Title: Soulmate
Written by:oxybangtangen
Review↯
-Desc i dont know but its quite short maybe boleh tambah something. Oh yea why not you tambah quotes.
-Content? At first saya ingat like fanfic biasa then i kinda shocked. Sebab bukan macam apa yang saya imagine. So at first saya hanya scroll then repeat it for several times after that terus i asked my PA to help me. Because first chapter without any statement or story terus ada mcm chatroom(?) I guess so. After part 10 rasanya baru ada kinda story. So i lil bit confuse dekat situ.
-Font style quite okay.
-Bahasa aaaaaaaa dekat sini saya rasa saya tak boleh komen banyak since i argue with my PA. But overall okay. Cerita n chatroom tu ada kaitan.
-Paragraph okay.
-Words chapter by chapter half half (since ada chatroom)
My opinion↯
-Okay untuk style macam awak ni maybe kena banyak tambah quotes baru nampak nice. Serious talk i asked my PA to give some opinion and to read it too. And she said okay even kitaorang tak sekepala. Chatroom and story tu dia kata ada kaitan. So i just accept her opinion. Even nak rate pun kitaorang bergaduh siap main tambah tolak. So i just follow the flow.
Rate↯
50/100
Keep your hard work
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