Title: Being Hate by Love
Written by: jiminmochidoodoodoo
Review
-Description √
-Ok as i know memang mostly fanfic akan menggunakan teknik dialogue but kesalahannya
E.g
Jimin: malasnya lahai . taknak school la , ala tapi nanti kena denda
Corrections
Jimin:Malasynya lahai. Taknak school la, ala tapi nanti kena denda.
OR
Jimin:Malasnya nak pergi sekolah tapi nanti kena denda pula.
-Shortform like utk-untuk
-Teen slang like sapa -SIAPA, tibatiba -Tiba-Tiba, sibuk² tolong la elakkan penggunaan cara-cara tersebut.
-Ada juga beberapa sentences yang ayatnya terabur. Sukar difahami.
-Font style english words boleh guna italic or pelbagaikan.
-Chapter nampak panjang sebab guna dialog. Boleh membuat pembaca bosan.
-One tone
-No closing TBC
Actually for fanfic its quite hard for me to review sebab saya bukan in that genre. So kadang-kadang pendapat saya akan bercanggah dengan fanfic author maybe. So since awak pun in editing boleh perbaiki lagi. And sorry for the late review.
Rate
35/100
Keep your hard work
Thank you
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