Title: Paradise Love
Written by: Assalsabila15
Review
-Story description okay.
-Like author yang lain suka letak ayat like quotes dipermulaan chapter.
-Hrmm font untuk English words ada yang tak seragam so boleh recheck balik. If ada masa.
-Kalau awak nak satukan dialog cast and statement dalam satu paragraph tak salah tapi statement jangan terlalu panjang sampai dialog itu tidak menonjol.
Better asingkan.
-Penggunaan font okay.
-Space for kata ganda.
Eg.
Lebih - lebih
*Lebih-lebih*
-No closure(TBC or etc)
-Kadang-kadang chapter yang terlalu panjang juga boleh buat readers bosan. But it's okay. It's an option actually.
Rate
58/100
Keep your hard work
Thank you
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