torture

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is it really the end?

for they say death is only the beginning.

Don't start what you can't finish.

It will drag you into the darkness like the oceans calming waves. Trapping you under its weightless yet unbearably heavy body. Cradling you, suffocating you until you are forced to finally surrender to its dark depths and accept your fate like the good girl you are and always will be.

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book book book srry im irritating i honestly like this poem, like like like seriosly lol. anyway comment? vote? comote(yes i made that word copyright myya)? advice? yes i need the critisism, the constructive critisism ofc, as to me being a new born poet and all lol. btw i'm 14 and i started last summer when i was 13 so i dont have a very long experience with poetry and all. thanks verr muchee for ur time u lovely people!

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