Long Way From Home [BWWM] [UNDER CRITICAL EDITING]

Update

I have gotten a lot of feedback about some things wrong with the book (It was rushed, Amber and Lily's conversation, etc) so I've decided to make this book a kind of 'Rough Draft' to build upon. So I've decided to make this a rough draft and to write another book to correct some of the major errors.

Fixing the errors in this book would basically require me to rewrite the whole book because some of the errors are such big chapters.

All the characters are going to be there I just feel like I want to make the book better and to improve based on what you guys thought was wrong. So if you guys could, I would love it if you could comment some things wrong with the book so I can fix that in the second book.

This book will be labeled rough draft so you can tell the difference from this book and the other book.

Thank you.

~@usewithcaution