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Hello!

You've reached the end of this short story. It was quite short, wasn't it?

Macsen. I really don't actually hate that name, the main character did, just to clear that up.

I got the idea of a boy, basically a ghost boy, from three books. Two of them were written by Wattpad member @/ExplosiveWafflez, Emily's Suicide and Corren's Fight. I absolutely love both of them. The third book was the Book Thief by Markus Zusak.

I wrote this book to show how much death affects families and friends. I wanted to show that not all books have happy ending; I wanted to relate to how life really is, which is cruel and unfair, but, most of all, imperfect. Life isn't perfect to other people. It is only perfect to one person: you. It is perfect for you because it was created especially for you.

Value life. Truly value life. It is the best gift you could ever recieve.

Please do not comment the main character's name, how he died, or that his father died. It shows up on the front page under 'Recent Comments' and could spoil the rest of the story for the person.

Thank you so much for reading, commenting, voting, fanning! If you haven't voted, commented, or fanned, I'd highly appreciate it if you did!

Bye guys! Go read my other stories while you are at it!

UPDATE: I'm posting a longer version of this book called "Look a Little Bit Closer" so check it out!

-Drew