Review - Slayer Girl - Veronica_knight13

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Book Name: Slayer GirlS

Author: Veronica_knight13

Status: In progress

Genre: Fantasy Romance

Blurb: When Cass Ashford was thirteen, she learned how to snap a neck in two. When she was fifteen, she was taught how to properly wield a dual bladed sword. Now at eighteen, she is a fully realized Slayer, battling the vicious, flesh-eating monsters that co-exist in her world alongside her flirtatious, badboy partner Jonathan Hughes. When Cass is transferred out of her hunting grounds and into the city of the Emerald Special Zone to guard the people there, she doesn't expect anything to stray from her usual pattern. However, in this city of plagues, rampant serial killers, and a gorgeous male demon aristocrat that she can't seem to get out of her mind, nothing is as it seems. [FIRST DRAFT/UNEDITED]

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/48563406-slayer-girl-prologue-bond

General Over view: Wow, this story has a strong and gruesome start. I must say I was pulled in to this story instantly and the way our main character's blindness is described is awesome. I am really enjoying the description. 

Love this prologue. Just love it. No words to describe. Just go read it xD

We switch from third person to first person in the first chapter and I cannot say if I am looking forward to this or not- truth be told I quite enjoyed the third person prologue but, we shall see! 

I must say, I'm impressed! The first person view actually works really well and it is a really enjoyable, slightly humorous story. Spider-demons as well! I just love the creation and design put in to this story and its only the first few chapters! The story keeps up a good pace and I'm surprised at the end of the second chapter- a cliff hanger... ooooo gotta read on! But guys, this story is hard to explain but it has something alot of stories lack- not that I can pin point what that is. But just go check it out!

Haha I also love the end of the third chapter! But do not take my word for it, just go and enjoy it yourself! 

Grammar:

 The grammar is superb and I have nothing bad to say about it. The descriptions are awesome  and everything flows smoothly and there is alot of fast paced action in there. The fantasy add a nice touch to!

My Opinion:

For the four chapters I read. AWESOME. 'Nuff said. Now, I am going to read the rest and add to my library! I highly recommend it.

My score: 10

P.s. Sorry its a short review, I do not feel to well however, like I have said to others- I will be revisiting your stories after I have read more of them.

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