Goldenpelt's Revenge

Chapter 1

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Goldenkit opened his eyes for the first time. Brightness filled his vision, then shapes started to take place. A loud squeak startled him. "Goldenkit finally opened his eyes, Grayfoot!" A gray she-cat with fluffy gray fur smiled at me and started to purr loudly.

"I'm Whitekit, and this is Fishkit and this little scrap of fur is Willowkit," meows the white kit, pointing to each kit in turn.

"Can we explore the rest of the world?" Goldenkit asks, eager to see new things.

"No, we can't leave the nursery until tommorow. But then we can explore the whole camp!" She says excitedly.

"Oh, wow!" But then my eyes start to droop. "Let's take a nap, so it will go quicker." He settle down and closes his eyes as sleep crashes over him.

"Come on Goldenkit! We can explore the camp now!" The soft pitter-patter of kit paws made the golden colored cat open his eyes for the second time in his short life. Energy surged through Goldenkit as the remembered that he could see! Goldenkit raced after the other kits, trying to catch up with them.

"Wait for me!" Goldenkit yowls as he pass Willowkit, and the small black kit yowls in surprise. Then, Goldenkit slams into a golden pelt that looks just like his.

"Hey, watch- wait, you opened your eyes, Goldenkit!" says the cat with surprise.

"Who are you?" asks Goldenkit. The golden cat twitches his whiskers amusingly.

"I'm your father, and my name is Finchwhisker. Where are you little kits going?"

Fishkit answers for me. "We're exploring the camp! Come on guys, the dawn patrol is back!" He bounds over to the fresh-kill pile. It's sunhigh, so all the warriors are crowded around it, but luckily Fishkit was small so, he ran under the long warriors legs. Finchwhisker let out a mrrow of amusement.

"Fishkit, watch out for-" the golden warrior was cut off by an annoyed yowl.

"Back of the line, kit!" A grumpy looking cat padded out of the crowd and growled, "Kits these days..."

"That's Whitewhisker, he's the medicine cat," whispered Finchwhisker. "He can heal any injury or cure any sickness, and we're lucky to have him!" He raised his voice so the other kits could hear. "I'll show you around the camp if you like. I'm the deputy, so I have access to the leaders' den. Let's go there first."

"Okay!" Goldenkit meows excitedly. The five cats pounded over to a crack in a huge rock, with lichen hanging over it.

"Woah..." Whitekit breathes. The inside if the den is dim and cozy. A moss and bracken nest is in the corner farthest from the entrance and I can smell a strong scent of cat.

"This is Stormstar's den. He's the leader of all of ThunderClan, but he's out on patrol at the moment. Let's get out of here before-"

A growl sounds behind them. "What are you doing in the leaders den?"