An Ember Bright

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Title: An Ember Bright

Comments:

"Woah... just read the summary and I'm already blown away! Outstanding use of vocabulary and the summary is sure to hook readers, it hooked me at least."

"I read the introduction chapter and I saw what you did there by capitalizing the 'T' in 'They', 'Them', and 'Themselves', to represent them as a significant group of people, very clever. There were only a couple of grammatical errors."

"The descriptions are written quite well- not too much, not too less. I can almost picture it in my head."

"I love the professionalism in your writing."

"Intriguing plot"

Overall Review:

•There's not a lot I can actually critique when it comes to your writing. Your writing skills are absolutely phenomenal and I definitely would recommend this book to some of my friends, who I know would enjoy this book.

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