Title: The Demon Within Us All
"Interesting title"
"Awesome cover! ...okay maybe I'm a bit bias 'cause I made that cover on my other account..."
"You should add a summary about the book."
"I read the first chapter and I thought your descriptions were superb. I've noticed a few grammatical errors, such as, started your sentences with 'but' on more than one occasion and placing your commas in the wrong spots."
"Very exciting!"
"I like your choice of words."
Overall Summary:
•I thought this story was very exciting and fun to read. With some editing, this story could gain more popularity, which it deserves. This book has an interesting plot and I would recommend it to others.
