Hello I usually won't do a whole part for an A/N, but I thought I had to much to say as an add on.
Firstly:
Magical Animagus vs Creature Inheritance:I changed my mind over how the magical animagus works, now it is as follows: (this won't really matter yet, not till the second year anyway) the magical animagus is a recessive gene and thus will not be automatically awoken at 16 like the creature inheritance. Some individuals with seven potential Animagus may only come into one while another may come into none at all. To awaken one an external stimulus is necessary such as snake venom to awaken parseltongue, this ability was awoken in his previous life and thus carried over.
Harry never got the basilisk inheritance because the Phoenix tears healed the affected cells before the change could start.
Magical Animagus is only capable of partial transformation e.g. he won't be able to turn into a basilisk, but he can turn his eyes into basilisk eyes, but it is striking on magic.Creature inheritance is the same as most other fan fictions: turns 16 and if the change isn't blocked then they will awaken their creature blood and be capable of complete transformation and partial transformation.
Secondly:
So when I started writing this first person was more comfortable, but now I find myself constantly falling into third person (I think that's what it's called you know: Harry did, Harry said...) So I was wondering what you all think.
Should I:
1) Continue writing how I have been
2) start writing in third person, but leave all previous chapters in first
3) start writing in third person and change previous chapters
4) other? Are there any others?Thirdly:
If I do end up changing the previous chapters I'll do that in my free time so you'll all still get one chapter a week.
Lastly:
Now for all of you who actually read this A/N (I know most people Skip them) I got preview of something that's going to happen later. ***spoiler*** this will happen in Harry's 4th year. If you don't want to be spoiled don't read.
1st person:
"Are you sure we should be here? It's a full moon... I don't fancy being chased around the forest by a werewolf." I said gazing wearily at the moon. Moving through the dense foliage Harry asked the two that presumed Jim into following him.
"Of course it's"
"Okay Harrykins"
"We heard Dumbles"
"Saying the dangeous"
"Creatures have"
"Been moved to"
"the other side"
"of the forest."
I looked sceptically at the two identical boys before me.
"Dangerous by Hadgrid standards or sixth year standards?" Fred and George froze mid September before laughing it off, but their voices were noticibly tense.
The twins decided that we simply has to go see the dragons that were supposedly in the forest and took me out for a walk.I looked around us and quickly asked the twins after seeing a broken tree. "Are we lost? We've already passed that tree."
Suspiciously neither was forth coming with answer. Half an hour later with the sound of an out as accompaniment we found what looked like a settlement.Walking (read: creeping) further into the settlement we all felt a deathly chill engulf us. I recognised the sensation immediately, "Dementors!"
The creatures flew before us and blocked our way forward. The twins stepped back in fear.
"Hey Harry do you think your Creature thing will work on them?" They both said in a surprisingly full sentence.
"There's one way to find out!"
"Lord Death... What may... your loyal servants... do for you..." The creatures said in a croaky whisper that only I understood.
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