Mr. & Mrs. Jalkukda/i Maheshwari

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Hello every one.. Welcome to the book... As you know it's a discussion book... I'll be posting written updates daily and they will be discussed.. And my discussion partners are.. sharvyo   Doraashi   radkam80.. So come and join the book with us 4.... These written updates are specially for my those friends who are fed up wih the current track and don't wanna watch the episodes.. Example - sharvyo.. Hope you'll like my idea..!!

Written update...

The episode starts with...

Tayiji Naina ko gussa kar rahi hoti hai aur thapad marne wali hoti hai tabhi preeti beech mein aake apna crime (according to tayiji and rakesh sir) confess kar leti hai... Sab usse dant te hai aur puchte hai aisa kyu kiya...???

(Sabke sab duffer hai.. Itna bhi nahi samajh aata Naina shadi nahi karna chahti isiliye.. Saf saf tou lika hai chithi mein..*face palm*)

Preeti rote-rote saabko kehti haiki Naina use shadi nahi karna chahti.. Aur ye chithi maine likhi hai.. Chaho tou handwriting mila ke dekhlo.. Ise tou kuch pata bhi nahi tha.. Aur phir bolti hai ki kisiko bhi uski khushi ki parwah nahi hai.. Agar koi lardka dahez nahi leraha tou kya shadi kardoge... (To tayiji) Apki zid ki chakkar mein Uski zindagi barbad hojayegi... And she also says agar aapko apki zid puri karni hi hai tou meri shadi karado sharad se.. Mujhe konsa pardhna hai.. Pur plz naina ke khwab mat todo.. She even pleads tayi ji... Saying Naina wants to become something in her life etc... Rakesh sir get too much angry and pushes preeti and is about to slap her.. Chachaji again holds him.. He angrily say.. Naina sirf dulhan banegi.. Woh bhi sirf sharad ki..!! Anand holds him back... R sir says anand samjhalo apni beti ko.. Warna anarth hojayega...

(One question - Kya inko thappad marne ke alawa kuch aur aata hai.. Chachaji sabse chote hai.. Phir bhi sabse samajhdar hai.. Aur jab dekho tab tayiji rakesh sir.. Sab thappad hi mar rahe hote hai..!!😡😡)

Anand gets a bit upset and says.. Ye kya laga rakha hai aapne bhaisab aapki beti aapki beti.. Ye dono humari betiyan hai.. Iss ghar ki betiyan hai..(soo emotional scene..😭😭)..
R : isiliye bigard gayi hai.. Ye log galti karti hai aur tum parda dalte ho..
A : parda dalne wali koi baat nahi hai bhaisab.. Aur kya galat kaha preeti ne..???
Tayiji(jumping between the convo with her kardvi kareli and neem chadi zuban): o bai..!! Apko tou kuch galat kaha lagega.. Aap bhi nahi chahte ye shadi ho... Kyuki aab jal rahe ho.. (😱😱 .. Dimagh thikane pe nahi hai tayiji ka..).. Aapko jalan horahi hai ki ye faisla aapse puche bina liya jaaraha hai..!
Anand gives a hurt look...😟😢.. And Bela gets shocked....😱..
A:Bhabhiji ye aap kaisi baatein kar rahi ho.. Maine hamesha Naina ko pooja preeti se bardhkar maana hai.. Aur mai uski khushi se jalunga..????😢😞😞..
T:Han kehrahi hon... And she gives some more kardwe remarks to chachaji...
N:Tayiji ye aap kya bol rahe ho...😟😟...
Tayiji..: chup..!!
Then they do some more drama
R:ye shadi tou hokar rahegi.. Aur agar koi iss shadi ke bech aaya tou uska mujhse rishta khatam..!!
(Lo shuru hogaya emotional drama!!)
and tayiji and rakesh leave the place.. Naina hugs preeti and both cry.. Chachaji and chachiji try to console them..
Naina vo : Aaj kal tou phir bhi lardkiyon ko apne rishte ki baat mein thoda bohat bolne diya jata tha.. Lekin YUDKBH jab lardki tou kya uski behan ki baat ke bhi koi mayne nahi the.. Lekin us din preeti ne jo kiya man tou kar raha tha usse zrse gale kaga lun.. Bahadur preeti.. Bhai behan na bilkul aise hote hai jaise cake pe cherry.. Chat me nimbu.. Phool pe titli..

Scene ends..
Night time..
Naina was sadly sitting on her bed.. The phone rings..
N:Kahi Sameer ka tou nahi...

(Sameer kyu karega aaj ke drame ke baad wo su ko phone karega isse kyu.. Han lekin bewafa ke gane sunane ke liye kar sakta hai...)

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