Author is IfOnlyTheWorldKnow.
This is a anime book, and, to be honest, anime really isn't my cup of tea. IfOnlyTheWorldKnow has a good idea, and I'm not exactly sure if I'm really qualified to be a anime judge. They do need to improve their grammar, and to add some more details (describe surroundings,people, etc) to make the sentences flow a bit smoother. Practice will help, just like with any author. No one started out perfect, and I think that's something everyone need to remember! Have patience, and practice! :)
