Author: TheTigerWriterTheTigerWriter
Both of the books are written well, and with minor to no grammar and punctuation errors.
However one thing I noticed that while both have good plots, RWAIB was harder to get into to, and TSOT shouldn't have the first chapters be about settings and details. I find that the best books find ways to work the details into the story. For example, instead of saying "Sam has pink hair" a better way to say it would be, "I stared as the sandwhich flew across the room and landed squarely on Sam, discoloring his once pink hair."
But again, but books are good, and keep writing!!! :) ;)
