So, let me first say how mad I'm at this book.
Why?
Because from the very first chapter, I've been HOOKED on this book.
This book is amazing, and it's very well written.
That being said, the only thing I would say is just a little bit bad is a little bit of information overload.
But, let me say, it's definitely not as bad as it could be.At least for me, there's been no chapters where I snapped and had to stop reading, and I'm a picky reader.
Punctuation and grammar is pretty much perfect, other than a few mistakes. But, hey! It's pretty hard to find a book on Wattpad that doesn't have a few mistakes. I guarantee that all of my books do, and so do 99% of everyone else's.
But, mistakes are okay! You learn from them, and that's what makes you a good writer.
bluelipstick12 you need to keep writing, because you're very skilled writer already, and the rest of you need to go read her book, 90 Deadly Days! And, because I'll be mad if I don't get to read more of your very talented writing!
Good luck!
