Oki
I know it's probably not good, but if you know anyone who likes this type of thing, please recommend it. I see people are reading but I'm not really getting any feedback. This is my first story, and it took alot for me to publish it. I need to know how to improve for future stories. If something doesn't make sense, if I'm not being descriptive enough, if I left something hanging, anything. Be super nitpicky. Any feedback is great. You could tell me this story sucks ass, and I wouldn't care, as long as you told me what to fix. It means alot to me when people comment because I know someone is reading.
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I Was A Runaway
Mystery / ThrillerI paused, not wanting to repeat what had happened. My wrists were bruised and i had already been beaten. "No. Go on, kid. I wanna know. How exactly did you get here?" You could hear the smirk in his voice as he circled my chair. A tear threatens to...
