This story is still being edited, and so, I welcome any and all feedback. Continuity issues? Spelling? Lacking character development? Tell me what could make the story better.
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Thanks to readers like @blackswirlycloakguy, @DewayneDale, and @AlexMcGilvery. Due to their helpful comments, I've been able to consider different elements of the story, and improve upon the initial draft. For that, I will be eternally grateful.
*Update*
In anticipation of submitting to the Watty's, I will be editing almost daily, and dividing longer chapters into shorter, Wattpad-friendly sections. Not to mention, I'm crafting a different ending, or more of an alternate ending for Damon and Sam.
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Obsolution ✔
Science FictionTy, a shift manager with an alcoholic wife, creates a female replicant in a dystopia veering toward full mechanization. For Ty, the surreal drudgery of working in a retail environment is interrupted when robotic interfaces are installed at his job...
