hello guys...so basically this is my third avneil ff....just peep in it...i m sure u would love it...this story is little similar to movie fanaah....but there will be change in my story....also it will be mature..
A girl is seen in a room holding guitar in her hand....their is so much pain in her eyes...so much pain in her life...still she pretends to be happy in front of her family....she did not want to give any kind of pain to them...she knows that her family loves her very much...she is pampered child of her parents...she can't share her pain with her family...she thinks she is burden on them....she is waiting for someone special with whom she can share her pain....she starts singing
MANZILEIN RUSVA HAI KHOYA HAI RAASTA AAYE LE JAAYE ITNI SI ILTIJA YEH MERI ZAMANAT HAI TU MERI AMAANAT HAI
Her eyes which has so much of pain
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Aaaa aaaa
MUJHKO IRADE DE KASME DE VAADE DE MERI DUAON KE ISHARON KO SAHARE DE DIL KO THIKANE DE NAYE BAHANE DE KHWABON KI BAARISHON KO MAUSAM KE PAIMANE DE APNE KARAM KI KAR ADAYEIN KAR DE IDHAR BHI TU NIGAHEIN
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SUN RAHA HAI NA TU RO RAHI HU MAIN SUN RAHA HAI NA TU KYUN RO RAHI HU MAIN
SUN RAHA HAI NA TU RO RAHI HU MAIN SUN RAHA HAI NA TU KYUN RO RAHI HU MAIN
Someone calls her
Voice:avni...neeche aaja beta...breakfast ready hai
Avni:ji maa....aayi...
She picks her stick and starts walking with the help of that...
Neela:avni beta...aa..beth...aaj maine teri pasand ka poha banaya hai...
Avni sits down
Avni:maa...aap toh roz hi mere pasand ka banate ho...iss ghar main mujhe chod kar bhi bahot log rehte hai...
Till then riya and aman comes down...
Neela:are aman...aaj kal tu jaldi kaise uth jata hai...
Aman:ha maa...yeh sab mere alarm ki vajah se...
Riya:aman...tu jaldi uthne ke liye alarm lagata hai...
Aman:kisne kaha main alarm lagata hu
Riya:toh phir?
Aman:avni dii hai na mera alarm...inke gaane ki vajah se hi main aaj kal jaldi uthne laga hu...vaise dii...aapki aavaj kitni acchi hai...aap singing main kyun try nahi karti...
Avni:maine abhi tak uske bare main socha nahi hai...main isliye gaati hu kyunki gaana gane se mujhe sukun milta hai....
Riya:sach yaar avni...koi bhi tera gaana sunega na voh tere piche pagal ho jayega...teri aavaz main kya jaadu hai...hai na neela chachi...
Neela:haa baccha....tum singing main apna career bana sakti ho....
Avni:voh main baadme sochungi filhaal mujhe college ke liye late ho raha hai...chal riya....
Riya nods and both leaves in car....
Ashish and dayavanti comes down
Ashish:are...mera superstar chala bhi gaya....
Neela:haa...chali gayi voh....ashish..aap plz use manaiye na....voh aapki baat nahi talegi...
Ashish:neela tum jaanti ho na...avni ko ek sui se bhi kitna dar lagta hai...voh nahi manegi operation ke liye...
Dayavanti:lekin kya voh zindagi bhar toh aise nahi reh sakti na.....use bhi yeh duniya dekhne ka haq hai...
Ashish:main jaanta hu maa....main aaj raat ko usse baat karunga...lekin main koi guarantee nhi de sakta...kyunki aaplog sabhi jaante hai ki avni kitni ziddi hai....
In college Avni and riya arrives
Avni walks towards her friends with the help of riya...she was about to fall but ali held her....
Riya:avni...yeh tu kya keh rahi hai...tu gir jayegi...
Avni:maine kaha na...haath chod mera
Riya unwillingly leaves her hand.... Avni starts walking slowly...but from other direction one boy was coming.....she collides with him and she falls down...
Avni:ouch...
Boy:hello...dikhayi nahi deta kya...yeh college campus hai koi tumhare ghar ka garden nahi jo yaha tehalne aayi ho...
All friends of avni comes there and helps her to stand..
Boy:tumhari vajah se saare books neeche gir gaye...andhi kahi ki
Riya:oh hello...just shut ur mouth and get lost...
Boy:vah re vaah...ek to chori upar se sina jori...main yaha se tabhi jaunga jab yeh(pointing towards avni) mujhse sorry bolegi..
Avni:sorry
Boy:better.. He leaves
Riya:yeh kya hai avni...tumne use sorry kyun bola ..
Avni:chod na riya...
Riya:kya chod na ha...maine kaha tha na ki main haath pakad ti hu...lekin tumhe toh meri baat hi nahi sunni..
Vidyut:avni...tum kyun itni jiddi ho...abhi usi vajah se gir gayi na...
Avni:gir kar hi toh log sikhte hai vidyut...aur tum log kab tak aise mere saath rahoge...puri zindagi toh nahi reh sakte na...toh mujhe khud hi akele chalne ki aadat dalni hogi....
All sighs...
Mitali:achha ab chalo...varna class ke liye late ho jayega...
Avni and riya is forward...and others are behind them
Vidyut:yar ali...dekhna...ek din koi aisa jarur aayega jo avni ka saath dega...use pyaar karega...uske saath humesha khada hoga....voh bhi pyaar deserve karti hai...mujhe bahot bura lagta hai jab koi use kuch bhi kehta hai....lekin jab vo aayega na tab kisi ki bhi himmat nahi hogi avni ko kuch kehne ki..
Ali:haa yaar...kaash vo jo koi bhi ho...jaldi se aa jaye...aur avni ki zindagi khushiyon se bhar de....
Juhi:tum log chinta mat karo...aisa koi jarur hoga jo avni ko dil se pyaar karega...jise avni ke blind hone se koi farak nahi padta hoga....
Avni was having tears in her eyes as she had listen their talks....
Avni:kya sach main koi aisa hoga...jise mujhse pyaar hoga...lekin mujh jaisi andhi ladki se kon pyaar karega..
Here is first chapter...just share ur views and plz vote and comment
