After college when avni was returning home...she saw one couple who was enjoying icecream at the corner of road...she remembers her and neil's moments....a lone tear escape her eye...she immediately leaves from there...
At mehta mansion
Ashish:Neela main soch raha hu ki kyun na avni ki shaadi karva de...shayad voh neil ko bhul jaye...
Neela:Nahi ashish...aisa karke hum uske dukh ko aur badha denge...main use aur dukhi nahi dekh sakti..
They sees avni ...before anyone can ask her something...she immediately ran towards her room and locked herself...ashish was about to go behind her but neela stops him...
Ashish:mujhe uske paas jane do neela...aaj phir kisi vajah se use neil ki yaad aayi hogi isliye voh bhaagte hue apne kamre main chali gayi...
Neela:voh neil ko bhuli hi kab thi ashish...use vakt do...use ab khud hi apne aap ko sambhalna hoga...
Ashish sighs and nods
In avni's room....
Avni remembers neil's words
"Main kabhi tumhe chodke nahi jaunga avni...tum chahogi..tab bhi nahi"
Avni:promise
Neil:promise
Avni:u broke ur promise neil...tumne apna vaada tod diya....
She starts singing playing guitar
(Song in bold letters
Tum bin-sanam re)
KUCH PAL TOH THEHAR JAO NA
YA PHIR LAUT KE AAO NA
YUN KEHTE NAHI ALVIDA
MUD JAO IDHAR AAO NA
TUMHE DHUNDE MERI AAKHEIN
TUMHE KHOJE MERI BAHEIN
TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE
KAISE JIYA JAYE TUM BIN
TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE
KAISE JIYA JAYE TUM BIN
He knows that she will not able to live without him still he broke his promise
KITNE THE VAADE KIYE
IK PAL MAIN TOD DIYE
JHOOTA NAHI TU
MUJHKO PATA HAI
BAS THODA RUTHA SA HAI
TU RUTHE MAIN MANAU PAR TUM BIN KAHA JAU
TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE
KAISE JIYA JAYE TUM BIN
TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE
KAISE JIYA JAYE TUM BIN
He knows that avni is nothing without neil..still he broke his promise...
YEH AASMAAN AUR ZAMEEN
BIN TERE KUCH BHI NAHI
SAANSON SE MOHLAT ZARA MAANG LENA
YOON UTH KE JAATE NAHI
YA PHIR TU MUJHE LE CHAL SANG APNE JIDHAR TU CHALA
TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE
KAISE JIYA JAYE TUM BIN
TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE
KAISE JIYA JAYE TUM BIN
Now she was not able to control anymore..she broke down right there and then...
She sits on her knees and screams his name
Avni(while crying):plz neil...vaapas aa jao mere paas...aur nahi seh sakti main...mujhe tumhari zarurat hai neil...plz apni avni ke paas vapas aa jao.....
On other side
A boy wakes up with jerk...he is sweating badly...
Boy:yeh kaisa sapna tha...aisa laga jaise ki kisine mujhe aavaz di...
He shrugs away his thoughts and again sleeps
At morning
There is shown one mansion
A lady in her mid forties is giving instructions to a maid
Lady:dekho...maine jo jo kaha hai aaj vahi banana
Another lady comes there
Lady 2:oyy shweta...meri davai kaha rakh di tune
(So the first lady is shweta khanna)
Shweta:bebe...maine vaha aapke bed ke side table ke drawer main hi toh rakhi hai...
(So the second lady is bebe)
Bebe:tu na meri davai ek hi jagah par rakha kar....
A boy cames down listening their regular fights
Boy:hello beautiful ladies...aaj kis baat pe jhagda ho raha hai..
Bebe:yeh toh hamara roz ka hai...tu bata...aaj itni subah subah kyun utha....
Boy:bebe voh kuch important kaam aa gaya hai isliye jaana padega...
Shweta:lekin maine aaj tere pasand ka naashta banaya hai...
Boy: I m very sorry mom...but I have to go...its urgent..
Shweta:lekin neil
(So the boy is neil)
Neil:plz mom...its very much important
He left from there
Bebe:yeh ladka bhi na...humesha jaldi main hota hai...
Shweta:aap tension mat lijiye bebe...main uske liye lunch leke jaati hu...
Bebe nods
Here neil enters police station and dd salutes him
Dd:good morning sir
Neil:good morning dd...toh batao...konsa important case aa gaya joh tumne mujhe itni jaldi bulaya...
Dd:sir...hume apne sources se information mili hai ki kisi college main drugs ka supply ho raha hai...kuch log college main students ko drugs provide kar rahe hai...aur hume yeh bhi pata chala hai ki iss sab ka joh master mind hai voh college main se hi koi hai...
Neil:hmm...kya yeh pakki khabar hai
Dd:yes sir...yeh news hume humare sabse trustable source se mili hai...
Neil:ok dd...hum ab aur der nahi kar sakte...bahot saare students ki zindagi barbaad ho jayegi iss drugs ki vajah se...hume jald hi culprit ko pakadna hoga....accha suno...commissioner sir se iss bare main baat hui...
Dd:no sir...voh aapka hi wait kar rahe hai...unko iss case ke baare main discuss karna hai
Neil:ok...main abhi mil kar aata hu...
He was about to move but his head starts spinning...he sit with thud on nearby chair...dd gets worried seeing him like this
Dd:sir..sir aap theek hai
Neil:pata nahi dd...lekin sar bahot bhaari ho raha hai...
Dd:sir...yeh lijiye..paani
Neil drinks water and feels better
Dd:sir aap ghar jaiye....
Neil:nahi dd....i m fine...
Dd unwillingly nods and neil leaves to meet commissioner
Dd:kya mujhe sir ko sach bata dena chahiye.....nahi...pehle mujhe mataji(shweta) se baat karni hogi...
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Avneil ff: Fanaah(completed)
Fanfictionhello guys...so basically this is my third avneil ff....just peep in it...i m sure u would love it...this story is little similar to movie fanaah....but there will be change in my story....also it will be mature..
