Avneil ff: Fanaah(completed)

chapter 18

Neil(shouts):avniii...

Truck was about to hit her but in mean time neil yanks her towards him...

But avni was struggling in his arms and was shouting at him to leave her...

Avni(shouts):leave me...chodo mujhe...mujhe neil ke paas jaana hai...koi nahi hai mera yaha...mujhe mere neil ke paas jaana hai...leave me..

Neil was trying to control her but she was not listening to him...

Neil:avni...avni listen to me....avni..

Avni pushes him and again goes in front of car...

Neil at once drags her at side and slaps her hard in order to bring her back in her senses...

Neil(shouts):listen to me avni...

Avni looks at him like a innocent child and neil's heart breaks seeing her like this..

He hugs her tightly and starts patting her back to calm her down...

Avni founds an unusual comfort in his arms..she hugs him back and starts crying like a baby.....

Avni(crying):ne...neil....

Neil:shhh...avni...bas...ab rona nahi..

Avni(hiccuping):tu...tumne dekha na...maa...maa ne kya kaha...voh....voh meri shakal tak...tak dekhna nahi chahti....she...she wants me...me to die..

Neil:nahi avni..koi bhi maa apne bacche ke liye aisa nahi chahegi...neela maa bas gussa thi isliye yeh sab keh gayi...

Neil brokes the hug and wipes her tears..

Neil:ab rona nahi ok...

Avni nods like a innocent child and neil smiles seeing her...

Avni:tumhe mujhpe gussa nahi aaya...tumhe toh mujhse gheen aani chahiye..why don't u hate me...

Neil:I can never hate u because I love u...joh log pyaar karte hai na voh kabhi nafrat nahi kar sakte...

Avni:tum itne acche kaise ho sakte ho neil...maine tumhe pure college ke saamne thappad maara...tumhe bhala bura kaha...tumhe mujhpe zara sa bhi gussa nahi aaya....

Neil:haa...ek baat pe mujhe bahot gussa aaya...

Avni:I know tum kis baare main baat kar rahe ho...yahi na ki main virgin nahi ho...

Neil:nahi...tumhare virgin hone ya naa hone se mujhe koi farak nahi padta hai....kyunki pyaar iss sab se kayi upar hota hai....pyaar ke liye virginity koi maayine nahi rakhti avni....pyaar ek aisa ehsaas hai joh har ehsaas se upar hai...pyaar main na koi bandishe hoti hai aur na hi nafrat...

Avni get touched by neil's words...his each and every word shows that how much he loves her...

Avni:toh phir tum kis baat se gussa ho...

Neil:main isliye naraz hu kyunki tum mujhe ek chance bhi dena nahi chahti..main jaanta hu ki tumne aaj joh kuch bhi ghar pe kaha voh jaan bhujhkar kaha taaki hum yeh rishta khud hi tod de....kyun avni...kyaa tum mujhe ek chance nahi de sakti...main tumse kuch bhi nahi maang raha hu sivaay ek chance ke...ek mauka do mujhe avni...main promise karta hu ki main kabhi tumhe niraash(disappoint) nahi karunga...

Neil has promised her...

But its been said that
"Promises are meant to be broken"

will neil be able to keep his promise or will he broke it in its worst form..

Neil:its ok avni...i can understand...lets go..

He leaves but stops in his middle feeling a hand on his wrist...

He turns and found avni holding his hand and looking at him intensely...

Avni:I m ready to give u chance...

Neil first was shocked and next second he was smiling widely....

He at once take her in his arms...

Neil(happily):thank u avni..thank u soo much...i promise...i'll never disappoint u...

Avni smiles and both leaves for mehta mansion...

Avneil enters in mehta mansion hand in hand..

Mehtas were shocked seeing them like this....

Neil:neela maa...avni is ready for this marriage...

All gets happy listening this...

Ashish:sach main superstar...

Avni:haa papa...vaise bhi main aap logo par aur bojh nahi banana chahti...

She says last line sadly with hurt...

Neela:baccha...

Neela was about to touch her but avni leaves neil's hand..

Avni:main thak gayi hu...i need to rest..

Saying this she goes upwards towards her room...

Ashish kept his hand on neela's shoulder..

Ashish:tum chinta mat karo neela....avni thodi naraaz hai...lekin voh apni maa se jyaada der tak naaraz nahi reh sakti..

Neela nods sadly while neil takes blessing of elders and then leaves for khanna mansion..

At khanna mansion..

Bebe:pata nahi yeh sab kya ho raha hai humare tillu ke saath...

Prakash:aap chinta mat kariya bebe...sab theek ho jayega...

Shweta:ek baat acchi hui ki pehle hi uss ladki ne apni sacchai hume bata di...mera tillu bach gaya uss ladki se...

Bebe:yeh tu kaisi baat kar rahi hai shweta...tu hi thi na joh neil ka rishta avni se karvana chahti thi...aur ab tu hi aisi baat kar rahi hai..

Shweta:bebe..tab mujhe uss ladki ki sacchai pata nahi thi na...lekin ab main uss ladki ko neil ki zindagi se dur kar dungi...

Bebe was about to say something but stops seeing neil entering khanna mansion..

He was looking very happy while khanna's were confused seeing him happy...

Bebe:neil..tu itna khush kyun lag raha hai...

Neil hugs bebe

Neil(happily):bebe..bebe.............bebe...main aaj bahot khush hu..aapko pata hai...avni shaadi ke liye maan gayi...

Bebe:kya..sach..

Neil:haa bebe...ab avni hi iss ghar ki bahu banegi...main bata nahi sakta main kitna khush hu...

Bebe and prakash was happy seeing him happy while shweta was angry and shocked as she does'nt want a girl like avni to be her daughter in law...according to her virginity is the most important character of girl...

But did she know that avni has lost her virginity to none other than her son neil...

What will she do now..

Will she accept her or will she plan something against avni...

Here is next chapter guys

How is it

Are u excited for upcoming twists...

And guys i want to inform u that fanaah's ending will be different...it will be beyond ur expectation

So plz don't bash me for this as i have to justify the title of the story..

Hope u will understand my pov...

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Love Mamta