Avneil ff: Fanaah(completed)

chapter 21

Avni smiles sadly while neil and others were confused...

Avni starts clapping her hands slowly making others confused like hell....

Avni:wow....i mean just wow....no words Mr.khanna...really matlab kya acting karte hai aap...aapko toh filmo main hona chahiye...

Neil:tum kehna kya chahti ho avni...saaf saaf kaho...ab konsa naya drama hai yeh...tumhe hi yeh shaadi nahi karni na toh aaj tumhari wish puri ho rahi hai...u should be happy right....

Avni laughs sadly hearing this...

Avni:Avni main promise karta hu ki main tumhe kabhi disappoint nahi karunga .........yahi kaha tha na aapne Mr.Neil khanna....
Kaha gaya aapka promise...upps..main toh bhul hi gayi that promises are meant to be broken....

Neil was only looking at her trying to digest her words...somewhere in his heart he knows that avni is innocent ...

Avni:or aap....(to shweta)....aap bhi kaafi acchi acting kar leti hai..matlab kamaal hai yaar...puri ki puri family hi actor hai...not bad haa....vaise maine aapka kya bigada tha joh aapne mere saath aisa kiya...

Shweta was not able to make eye contact with her...obviously she was feeling guilty but still she was thinking that avni is not right for neil..

Neil:avni dekho...

Avni(shouts):shut up...just shut up...why the hell u came in my life...kyun aaye meri zindagi mein...main acchi khaasi jee rahi thi na apni zindagi...khush thi neil ki yaadon ke saath...phir kyun aaye tum.....kyun mujhe nayi ummed dikhayi....tum hi the na...joh kehte the ki avni...pyaar dobaara ho sakta hai....aur shaayad kuch had tak main tumhari baaton par vishvaas bhi karne lagi thi...haa neil khanna...pyaar hone laga tha mujhe tumse...lekin tumne kya kiya...ek hi jhatke main mera vishvaas tod diya...mujhe tod diya....

Neil shockingly looks towards her...he was somewhere happy that she was loving him but next second his world collapsed when he heard her next words.....

Avni(yells):I hate u neil...i just hate u....aaj tumne saabit kar diya ki saccha pyaar sirf ek baar hota hai...aur mera saccha pyaar mera neil tha...from now...u are nothing to me.....

Avni leaves from there while neil was standing there numb....

Bebe:shweta...sach bata...yeh sab tera naatak tha na...avni ne kuch nahi kiya na...

Shweta(stammers):be...bebe...yeh...yeh aap kya...kya keh rahi hai...main...main sach keh rahi hu...

She stops in middle when she felt a hand on her wrist...

She sees neil holding her hand...

Neil helds her hand and keeps it on his head...

Neil:aapko meri kasam mom...aap sirf sach bolegi..

Shweta:tillu tu..

Neil(shouts):mujhe sirf sach sunna hai mom...

Shweta looks down and tells him the truth...

Neil leaves her hand and moves backward...

He collapsed on floor with thud making all shocked....

Shweta(teary eyes):tillu..

Shweta was about to touch him but neil shows his hand to her...

Neil:stop...just stop there mom...koi zarurat nahi hai mujhe apni jhooti humdardi dikhane ki...

Shweta:tillu main...

Neil:aapne suna na kya kaha usne...she hates me now...she hates me....ab..ab main kya karunga....

He gets up and goes to bebe and asks her like a child..

Neil(choking voice):bebe...ab...ab main kya karu...main...maine use kho diya...voh...voh ab mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karegi...she hates me now....

Bebe:nahi neil...tu haar nahi maan sakta...jaa...jaa uske paas aur maafi maang...use bata ki tu usse kitna pyaar karta hai..

Neil:nahi bebe...ab...ab voh mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karegi...aapne suna na usne kya kaha..ki...ki voh mujhse pyaar karne lagi thi lekin...lekin aaj meri hi vajah se voh mujhse nafrat karti hai....

He goes to shweta

Neil:kyun mom...kyun kiya aapne aisa...voh mujhse pyaar karne lagi thi mom...aapko pata hai yeh mere liye kitni badi achievement thi...lekin aaj aapke vajah se sab khatam ho gaya...i lost her...

Shweta:tillu...main bas teri khushi chahti thi...

Neil:avni meri khushi thi mom...meri zindagi thi voh...lekin ab...ab voh chali gayi mujhe chod kar.....mera pyaar adhoora reh gaya...mera pehla pyaar adhoora reh gaya mom....

He ran towards his room and locked himself..

He cries his heart out...

On other side...

Avni was lifelessly walking on road.....

Avni(looking towards sky):i...i m sorry neil...i...i know ki maine galat kiya...but...but trust me neil..i...i still love u and will always love u....aaj mujhe meri hi galti ki saza mili hai...main bhatak gayi thi neil....pata nahi kyun main uss neil ki baaton main aa gayi....kaise maine uspe trust kar liya...lekin ab mujhe samajh main aa gaya hai ki mera saccha pyaar sirf tum ho....sirf tum......

(Background Song-naina)

Naina...joh saanjh khwaab dekhte the naina...
Bichad ke aaj ro diye hai yu

Naina.....
Jo milke raat jaagte the naina.....
Seher main palke michte hai yun

Judaa...hue kadam..jinhone ne li...thi yeh kasam..

Milke chalenge har dam
Ab baatte hai yeh gum
Bheegen naina...
Joh khidkiyon se jhaakte the naina....
Ghutan main band ho gaye hai kyun...

Screen splits into two halves...
On one side avni is looking at sky and on other side neil is sitting on floor crying his heart out

Target..

Nahi dena chahti yaar...😭😭😭

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Love Mamta