Naruto strength within book 2 (Edited)

Chapter 18

"Tch I guess they expect you to be able to beat me" Madara glared as he threw a fireball attack but I dodged it. This continued as I dodged his attacks, some getting me others missing.
"Kashi Uzumaki" I said and instantly Madara looked at me with his eyes wide before they narrowed.
"How do you know that name?" Madara demanded in a hiss.
"She was your wife and the woman you loved but there is something that you don't know about" I said looking at him, ready to dodge when he attacked.
"Shut up," Madara roared.
"She had a son before she was killed!" I yelled once again dodging as he hit the ground and he froze at what I had said.
"You got married in the Sand village and your son was born in the rain village, do you not wish to know about him?" I enquired, looking at Madara.
"You leaf shinobi probably just killed him, just like my wife" Madara yelled as he slashed out with his sword straight across my chest but I just got up again panting, a thin scratch like that wasn't going to keep me down.
"No they didn't, they didn't even touch your wife, Kashi left her baby boy at the gates of the leaf village and he has grown up there his name is Kuroki.....My name is Kuroki and I am the son of Kashi Uzumaki and Madara Uchiha, I am your son" I told him, looking at him as he stopped short and as he saw my sharingan blazing. I had the ability to choose between the three doton that I had and the fourth one that was them all combined so I could have just a normal Sharingan.
"T-That, that is a lie stop lying" Madara bellowed and I dodged even with the chest wound I had.
"I am not lying I don't want to have to kill you but if I have to I will" I growled and dodged the sword again but it cut the tie holding my hair making it fall down, Madara faulted a little as he looked at me. Even with short hair it was still wild and spiky in a way that seemed untameable and familiar since I was looking at the same hair in front of me.
"......Your hair it's exactly like mine and your eyes, what have I done? Why did I?" Madara muttered, my words had finally gotten through to him.

Suddenly a sharp pain went through my side making me gasp and drop to the ground coughing, holding a hand to my wound. I turned and saw Zetsu standing there with a blade in his hands, a blade that had my blood on it.
"Tch here I thought that I had finally gotten control over you, Madara, after getting rid of that pathetic woman but who knew that she was pregnant with this bastard?" Zetsu sneered and I cried out as he slammed his foot into my wound.
"What are you talking about Zetsu? You told me that Kashi was killed by the leaf village" Madara glared.
"Of course I did, I needed your help and I knew that if that woman found out my plans and told you not to do it then you would listen. You were just a pawn but you are no longer useful" Zetsu said and then a clone appeared behind Madara making me scream out his name but it was too late.
"No, no!" I yelled pushing Zetsu away and scrambling over to Madara who I knew was bleeding into his lungs.
"....K-Kuroki....I am.....Sorry I should.....I should have known.....I remember reading.....A letter.....I didn't believe it......I wish I had been with you" Madara whispered looking at me and my eyes were wide.
"NO! I just found you, you can't just leave me" I whispered tears streaming down my face.
"I.....I have been.....Gone for.....For a while.....This is just me brought back to.....To life......I'm.....so.....proud" Madara whispered before he finally went silent and still and disappeared into golden dust that I knew was from edo tensi.

"Kuroki" Minato whispered as they had got to us just in time to hear Madara's parting words.
"AHHHHHH!" I threw my head back and let out a loud screech my chakra instantly reacting around me. It slammed out, throwing the others back away from me as my eyes now showed their true form: a mix of all three doujutsu Magkyon Sharingan, Rinnegan and Byakugan. Instantly I looked at Zetsu and let out a scream again and took off slamming my fist straight into Zetsu's stomach ignoring my wounds.
"I have to get the seal" Minato panted as he pulled himself up again and Kushina nodded. They all pulled themselves up, they had already failed to hold Zetsu back since he had split himself into thousands of clones but they weren't going to let me down again. I had lost complete control of myself. My body was acting on chakra only attacking Zetsu while I was curled up in my mindscape, my eyes closed and my knees pulled up.
"Gone, all gone, what is there to live for now?" I whispered to myself. My parents were gone. Why bother with anything? No one cared that I was alive. Why did I get cursed with this misfortune?
"What are you talking about you troublesome boy?" a voice asked and blinked my eyes a little and looked to the side and I was shocked. Everyone was there and in front of them was Shikamaru next to a woman that had bright red hair with silver eyes that were familiar to me.
"Kuroki look at you so grown up once again" the woman said that I instantly knew was my mother.
"I knew that one day you would lose yourself to your chakra because of how much chakra you have, so I placed some of my chakra into your body so that I could help you get it under control. Though to be far I hoped it would be a lot later into your life then this" Kashi explained and I opened my mouth but I then closed it not being able to talk.
"You don't need to say anything Kuroki, I already know what is going on and I will tell you now it is not your fault that your father is dead. It is not your fault I am dead, I would not change anything for the world. I am glad that you are alive, you need to put your father and I into the past and leave us there. We are dead and gone but there are people that care for you in the leaf village, the sand village, the mist village, the lightning village. You are cared for by a lot of people especially your boyfriend Shikamaru, he is still waiting for you to get back. Are you going to just lay here and give in not even fighting? You wanted to find out about Madara and I so that you would know who you are and now you do, do not let it control you" Kashi lectured as she kissed my head and disappeared along with the others who were all smiling and Shikamaru looked at me fondly muttering a troublesome before he left.
'They are right I can't just let this get to me my friends are waiting for me, I may have lost my father and mother before I got to know them but I made a promise that I would get back to Shikamaru, no matter what happened this isn't me, I had friends and family waiting for me' I thought to myself before I uncurled and got to my feet and instantly my eyes snapped open and I saw that I was on the ground bruised up and the cuts I had were pouring out blood everywhere and Zetsu has just put a sword threw my chest.

"Fujin" I yelled instantly as I saw Minato had put the seal on Zetsu but couldn't get close to activate it.
"What is? NO!" Zetsu howled as he went to grab me but I jumped back as my legs gave out and Zetsu disappeared into a swirl of black.
"Kuroki" Itachi yelled as they all came over as I coughed blood all over my hand.
"Guess I won't get to see Maru again" I whispered as my vision started to blur.
"Get out of the way" a voice yelled and I blinked a little seeing Orochimaru and Kabuto there.
"What do you think you are doing?" Konan demanded, knowing that Orochimaru had been after me since the chunin exams.
"I am trying to save him but I need you to get back" Orochimaru growled as he cut my shirt open and then everything went black.